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AppleLPfreak
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i need some help

Posted by AppleLPfreak - January 6th, 2010


you see, im currently trying to write a novel called Lab Freaks. its basically about artificial immortal beings who are trained assassins for various countries. i already have the main character, whos name is Dante, and he is one of the first and oldest being born around the time Alexander the Great was born. his nemesis/love interests name is Scarlett, and shes about 20 or so. but what sould be helpful would be more charcters, more immortals with different types of powers and abilities, and if you can think of a backstory, like where they came from, how old they are, etc. itd be really helpful. and any i use ill be sure to put your newground name,(unless you give me your real name, but i prefer anons), in the credits part of the book. and if you have any other ideas in trems of storyline, plot, villains, that will go into consideration too. thanks! Later.


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back story? k,here we go:

In the year 20XX, everyone has been killed... that is, everyone except a horde of the infected. A group of alive scientists created bio-engineered super soldiers to fend off these monsters. And the fate of our species rests on them.

-SquidShark5

thanks, this has a very high possibility of becoming a story. but what i meant is for the characters. for example, im thinking of creating a character named Amadi. he was born in Africa shortly after the british took control of most of it, and so with a newborn child, his his tribe asked the god Eshu (african trickster god) to bless this child with the powers to save thier tribe from capture of the white man. so, Eshu blessed the child with strength, speed, but most importantly, the ability to disappear in the shadows of souls, which basically turns him invisible. and so, as he grew, he fought the british, and won most of the battlesn until the british had got an artificial immortal of thier own to fight him, and so he lost. Amadi is currently in central Africa working for the american govt. trying to assassinate a top black market dealer. thats the kind of back story im talking about, however, yours is quite interesting and i think i might use it for something. thanks anyway, this was helpful!